
Formal Critique
In the middle of a lake there is a man kneeling down on a small bridge over the water. It looks as if he is heading out towards the open water and building the bridge as he goes along. He holds bricks on his back and a hammer in his hands showing that he is working hard to build that bridge.
The bridge is the leading line bringing us into the picture and to the emphasis. There is nothing in the background but open water so the simplicity makes the emphasis strong. The lighting is not strong but it is good because it makes the picture look more serious. The message I got from it was he was building a bridge to his future.
I really liked this picture but I think it would have been better if it showed something that he was trying to get to.